Yes or No?

I this a good Intro?

"The Scarlet letter written by Nathanial Hawthorn is a condensed compilation of symbolism concerning the Puritan Society. Under his critical eye, Hawthorn calls attention to the flaws that a society could have under such strict rules of law. He uses is characters to display the weaknesses transcendentalism. Hawthorn uses his character Mistress Hibbins to exemplify the Hypocrisy of Puritan values. "

If no, why not?
Yes or No?
I certainly hope you are in college or a university. I cannot see any high school students submitting this.
Reply:Yes. I Like It
Reply:This is a very well written intro. It is interesting and draws the reader to read more of your paragraph/essay/etc.
Reply:i have no idea what any of it means but it sounds pretty smart :)
Reply:Yes....sounds good
Reply:yes...kinda make more interesting..so it will grab the reader's attention...
Reply:looks good. smells a wee bit like plagiarism though. better make sure its not.